This is our first draft of our music video although we had a few problems whilst filming and editing we feel we have done quite a good job with what we had. We are going to take into account all of the problems we had making this video and fix them so we can make a better draft next time. We have posted the video on youtube so we can get feedback of people and find out what they thought of the video we are also going to post the video on facebook and ask our friends to give us feedback.
Boy's. You'll get proper feedback from Mrs Somel and I during the week but for now here are some quick initial thoughts.
ReplyDeleteYour continuity is wrong at the start. Aaron goes left to right and then right to left.
The poker game could be brilliant but think about mise en scene. You've got a cabinet full of statues in the back of shot at the moment, it doesn't quite fit. (Try and be a bit closer on Josh's face for lip syncing). Also include more shots in this sequence
The hat and t-shirt sequence is excellent! Completely seamless. Great work! Could there be more of this theme in the video?
The 'dance' will need choreographing.
The bed isn't 'clear', at the minute it looks like Josh and Aaron are in bed together but I don't think that is what you were after.
Don't 'smoke' in the video. It breaches the rules for MTV etc.
Mr Smith
Mikey, get Josh N and Aaron to tube chop this and explain the bits they didn't like. Just like Aaron did when he explained the trophy idea for the cabinet to replace the ornaments.
ReplyDeleteAs Josh N is camera man for a lot of the shots he can explain what he needs to do/wants to do to improve certain shots.